Friday, December 4, 2009

Missing out

There are alot of things I'd love, if I had my own way. And for the first time ever, that comma, that one I stuck right in there...makes the sentence mean two different things, altogether. Without the comma, it's a statement, which would have felt much better.

Alot of things, I'd love. If I had my own way, I'd feel better.

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